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    sentence

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    Is it a good sentence?

    Though I am not interested nor I ever tried my hand at the occult stuff this book took my fancy.

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    Re: sentence

    Try,


    Even though I have never been interested in or have ever practiced the occult, this book took my fancy.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Soup View Post
    Try,

    Even though I have never been interested in or have ever practiced the occult, this book took my fancy.
    Hi

    but is my sentence completely useless?

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    Quote Originally Posted by GUEST2008 View Post
    Hi

    but is my sentence completely useless?
    It's meaningful, but awkward as in ungrammatical.


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    Quote Originally Posted by GUEST2008 View Post

    Though I am not interested in nor have I ever tried my hand at occult stuff, this book took my fancy.
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