Student or Learner
"Keep browsing the web site until you get to the page where you are asked to inform the price range and the number of rooms you want in the unit. After providing this information, press ´enter´ and wait for the response. The problem is that my computer freezes at this point. I can’t go further. But the intriguing part is that it only happens when I try to access the web site from my laptop. The problem doesn't occur when I use my desktop. I wonder if you are experiencing the same problem. "
Please, is this text ok?
Would you think it was written by a native?
Last edited by jctgf; 15-Jun-2008 at 17:02.
I'd change these:
asked to inform the price range- asked to state/give
I can’t go further- any further
Just to make sure that we're on the same page. Is this about renting a room/rooms in a hotel/motel?
Tdol made an excellent suggestion, JC. Take a peek at his posting.
thanks.Originally Posted by [LEFT
it's about renting a house/apartment.
I am supposed to say what's the price range and number of rooms in the unit that I am looking for.
Last edited by jctgf; 15-Jun-2008 at 23:21.
it's not a blank space. Actually I am supposed to check (choose) the price range and the number of rooms from a list. This way, I think it would be ''enter'' instead of ''fill in''. I tried to use a common verb, "inform", but it seems not to sound natural and appropriate, right?
Last edited by jctgf; 16-Jun-2008 at 00:06.