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    Paragraph on terrorism kindly proofread it

    Three big challenges India faces are terrorism, corruption and unemployment. Terrorism is the one of the biggest challenges India is plunged into. What I think about terrorism, the image of a hundred-headed monster conjures up in my mind. Terrorism is the passion of provocations. The two main provocations are region and religion- like Kashmir and Israel, Like Islam and Christianity.


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    Re: Paragraph on terrorism kindly proofread it

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    Three big challenges for India are terrorism, corruption and unemployment. Terrorism is the one of the biggest challenges India is plunged into. Of these, terrorism is the biggest challenge. When I think about terrorism, the image of a hundred-headed monster is conjured up in my mind. Terrorism is the passion outcome//result of provocations. The two main provocations are territorial aggression and religion - like Kashmir and Israel, like Islam and Christianity.
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