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    Talking Is he a God?or scumbag!

    Could anyone whose first language is English please correct the following?And please give reasons for corrections. Thanks.

    People shout his name and admire him blindly as if he was a God.

    He is not a God at all .He is just another scumbag and he is extremely narrow-minded. People whom he doesn't like, he has to get rid of them.
    Last edited by eelt; 19-Jun-2008 at 04:12.

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    Re: Is he a God?or scumbag!

    [quote=eelt;311413]Could anyone whose first language is English please correct the following?And please give reasons for corrections. Thanks.

    People shout(chant) his name and admire him blindly as if he was(were) a God.

    He is not (at all )a God .He is just another scumbag and he is extremely narrow-minded. People whom he doesn't like, he has to get rid of them.[/quote](He gets rid of the people whom he doesn't like).
    Correctiona in brackets.
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    rj1948.

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