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    Post Can you please correct my letter?

    Hello
    I`m new here =)

    I have written a leave letter but I don`t know if its correct.


    Dear Sir,

    By this I would like to apply vacation for the period
    24 july 2008 till 24 august 2008. Because I`m going to
    have a wedding party. I would like to enjoy this special
    occasion with my family, cousins and friends.

    Thank you very much for your consideration.

    Sincerely yours,

    Maria


    Thank you in advance

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    Re: Can you please correct my letter?

    Dear Sir,

    This letter is a request for a month's vacation from 24 July 2008 to 24 August 2008 as I will be getting married and would like to enjoy this special occasion with my family and friends.

    Thank you for considering my request.

    Sincerely yours,


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    Thank you soo much for a fast reply

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