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    Please correct my text

    I have already requested the factory pull in schedule to fulfill Angelís requested. These goods will be planned on the same production line with CRD115, but not Hi Techís goods. The goods for Hi Techís must set several independence production lines; otherwise it cannot fulfill the huge of goods.

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    Exclamation Re: Please correct my text

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    I have already requested the factory pull in schedule to fulfill Angelís requested. These goods will be planned on the same production line with CRD115, but not Hi Techís goods. The goods for Hi Techís must set several independence production lines; otherwise it cannot fulfill the huge of goods.
    I have already requested the factory pull in the schedule to fulfill Angelís request (ed). These goods will be planned on the same production line with CRD115, but not Hi Techís goods. The goods for Hi Tech (ís) need (must set) several independent (ce) production lines; otherwise it cannot
    acomodate(fulfill) the (huge) large volume of goods.

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    Re: Please correct my text

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    I have already requested the factory to change its schedule to fulfill Angelís request. These goods will be planned for production on the same line as CRD115, but are not Hi Techís goods. The goods for Hi Tech need a number of dedicated production lines; otherwise it cannot supply the required quantity of goods.
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