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    Is this senetence correct?

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    Re: Is this senetence correct?

    Thanks for your information. Please send us your packing list first. We will then advise Vivien on the shipping method.

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    Re: Is this senetence correct?

    Here's a variation.
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    Re: Is this senetence correct?

    Hi Soup,

    Do you think add one short sentence will be more clear ? or no need ?

    Thank you for the information. We will advise Vivien on the method of shipping once we have received your packing list. Please send it to us ASAP

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    Re: Is this senetence correct?

    Looks good.

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