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    please correct this senetence

    Please help to request the customer let us ship the goods earlier, because the factory has pull in the schedule to fulfill our requested and there is no space for them to store the goods. Thank you

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    Re: please correct this senetence

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Please help to request the customer to let us ship the goods earlier, because the factory has pull in the schedule to fulfill our request and there is no space for them to store the goods. Thank you
    Hi,Zoe!

    What do you mean by...

    "Please help"
    "pull in the schedule"

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    Re: please correct this senetence

    Hi Tzfujimino,

    I am asking our marketing colleague request the customer accept our earlier shipment, therefore I use : Please help at the starting (in order to more polite.

    pull in the schedule = advance shipment

    Thanks for your help

    Regards
    Zoe

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    Re: please correct this senetence

    Please ask the customer if we can ship the goods earlier. The factory has pulled in the schedule to fulfill our request and there is no space for them to store the goods.

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