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    #1

    Teaser Campaign

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    Breaking News !
    Mickey & his friends are missing from the Cartoon world!

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    Latest News!
    We have launched the man-hunt to search where they have gone...

    3.
    Good News !
    According to our reporter, Mickey & his friends are found in jewelry world…………………

    I am making a teaser campaign(generating curiosity by upholding the name till the end) for 'Disney jewellery'. We are sending three invitation cards(each in the interval of a week) but we will reveal the name in the final card. Help me to improve on the language

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    Re: Teaser Campaign

    We have launched the man-hunt to search where they have gone...
    I would use 'a manhunt' and I would change the last part; you'd be searching for the place as you don't know where it is. If you search something you examine a place to find somethiong. If you search for something, you try to find it.

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