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    Is this correct?

    This is the last chance for our customer accepted and release the shipment, please process it. Please pay more attention to manage the lot number in the future to avoid it repeatedly happen. We look for your prompt improvement.

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    Re: Is this correct?

    This is the last chance for for our customer to accept and release the shipment, so please process it. Please pay particular attention to the lot number and ensure that it is correct in future. We look forward to your prompt improvement.

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    Re: Is this correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    This is the last chance for our customer accepted and release the shipment, please process it. Please pay more attention to manage the lot number in the future to avoid it repeatedly happen. We look for your prompt improvement.
    ((Not a teacher))

    The customer has obliged with our request and has released the shipment. Please process the same with utmost care. We also request you to manage the lot number diligently in future to avoid the errors. We look forward to your prompt action and amendment.

    ((Zoe, is the first line right? Are you saying that the customer has agreed and has released the shipment??))

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    Re: Is this correct?

    This is the last time our customer will accept and release the shipment. Please process it. In the future, please pay more attention to managing the lot numbers so as to avoid this from ever happening again. We look forward to your prompt improvement.

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