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    pls help with US-engish text

    Hi. Can someone help me to check the next document pls. I would like to have in US-english. Thanks so much in advance. I appreciate.

    "Open letter to Harry from concerned owners/tenants.

    Hello Harry, Hi all,

    Harry, some people appreciate the job you are trying to do. However, pls dont overact. It will have an averse effect and you will loose (lost) credibility. At the meeting, the 10+ minutes you were talking about the lock on the swimming pool door was an example as such. Everybody felt you wanted to fight and steal the show. When you tried to get the crowd behind you, all neglected you and you had NO support at all. Think about that. If you want to do something, do it the good way and forget your ego. If you cannot, stop with doing anything for our condo.

    Owners have the right to know the truth. We hear different things from different folks and the situation is escalating. You know what is going on and, in stead talking nonsense, you better inform the people about the FACTS! In the meeting, Jeff showed some envelopes not sent to the foreigner owners. He told us the domestic people from the committee did not wanted to invite the foreigners at the meeting. Knowing that, he putted a sign at the entrance-door to inform all people about that, as it is normal to have a meeting with ALL people invited. The domestic committee members say the opposite. Jeff toke away the envelopes and did not sent them........ Who is right in this? This is very very serious and nobody talks about it. We want to know who the liars are........ Harry, you can bring clarity in this. We all know you are an old committee member and still have friends/contacts there. However, the situation becomes very dangerous. We expect you to take responsability in the name of all and for the well-being of our condo-complex.

    We also noticed police and immigration is checking all and everything now. It looks like a witch-hunt is going on for the foreigners after the old building manager stated angry at the meeting "all foreigners out". Police and immigration will stay for 1 week. This has never happened before. They question people and ask people questions about OTHER people. THIS IS EXTREME DELICATE. Many bad rumors going around. We all know that, if the old committee will come back, it would be a disaster for the building and the people living here.

    Take your responsability Harry and inform correct, to the point. Pls dont forget to tell the whole truth. Not a part of it, or your truth only.

    Thanks in advance Harry.

    A few concerned owners/tenants.

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    Re: pls help with US-engish text

    Open letter to Harry from concerned owners/tenants.

    Hello Harry, Hi all,

    Harry, there are some people who really appreciate the job you are trying to do. However, there are others who are concerned about your tendency to overact. It has an averse effect and causes you to loose credibility. At the meeting, the 10+ minutes you spoke about the lock on the swimming pool door is an example as such. Some people felt that you wanted an argument about the issue. When you tried to get the crowd behind you, most ignored you, resulting in you getting NO support at all. We ask that you think about that. We ask that if you want to do something, do it the reasonable way. If you cannot, then please refrain from doing anything for our condo.

    Owners have the right to know the truth. We hear different things from different folks and the situation gets confusing. You seem to know what is going on and, instead of arguing, please inform the people about the FACTS!

    At the meeting, Jeff showed some envelopes not sent to the foreigner owners. He told us the domestic people from the committee did not want to invite the foreigners to the meeting. Knowing that, he placed a sign at the entrance-door to inform all people about that, since it is normal to have a meeting with ALL people invited. The domestic committee members say the opposite. Jeff took the envelopes and did not send them........ Who is right in this? This is very, very serious - yet no one talks about it. We want to know who is not telling the truth.

    Harry, you can bring clarity in this. We all know you are an old committee member and still have friends/contacts there. However, the situation has become very dangerous. We expect you to take responsibility in the name of us all and for the well-being of our condo-complex.

    We also notice that the police and immigration are checking all and everything now. It seems like a witch-hunt is being conducted agains foreigners after the old building manager stated angrily at the meeting "alll foreigners out." The Police and immigration will stay for 1 week. This has never happened before. They question people and ask people questions about OTHER people. THIS IS AN EXTREMELY DELICATE SITUATION. Many bad rumors are being spread. We all feel that, if the old committee comes back, it could be a disaster for the building and the people living here.

    We ask that you accept your responsability, Harry, and inform others correctly and to the point. We want only the whole truth, not a part of it, or your version. We need facts and the truth, only.

    Thanks in advance, Harry, for your cooperation.




    A few concerned owners/tenants.

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