Results 1 to 2 of 2
  1. new2grammar's Avatar
    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • Punjabi
      • Home Country:
      • India
      • Current Location:
      • India

    • Join Date: May 2008
    • Posts: 880
    #1

    Headline for brouchure of school Please check it

    Land on target, achieve your goals Get an extra edge to succeed Perfection is the mother of success

    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • British English
      • Home Country:
      • UK
      • Current Location:
      • Laos

    • Join Date: Nov 2002
    • Posts: 57,845
    #2

    Re: Headline for brouchure of school Please check it

    Land on target- this sounds a bit weird to me; it's OK if you're a space shuttle, but people normally hit targets, etc.

Similar Threads

  1. Check and edit my essay please....
    By shoog in forum Editing & Writing Topics
    Replies: 5
    Last Post: 02-Jun-2007, 22:59
  2. Replies: 2
    Last Post: 30-Mar-2006, 06:27
  3. An article for school magazine - Please check for me,thanks!
    By K.N. in forum Editing & Writing Topics
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 13-Mar-2006, 22:27

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •