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    commercisl property ad please correct it

    Everyone wants share of this commercial space!

    As currently this is the only commercial space available at Lower Parel at the most strategic prime location for immediate possession. It is messiah for corporate world, houses some of the best MNCs in the business like Tata, Birla and Reliance Available 2500 to 80,000 sq ft for lease or outright. For more details SMS INNOVA to 56565 or call on…………

    I want to say this the location which everyone wants as it offers everything a business wants to succeed please help me


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    Re: commercisl property ad please correct it

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    Everyone wants a share of this commercial space!

    Set strategically in a prime location in Lower Parel, this is currently/at present the only commercial space available for immediate possession. It is messiah [the idiom in English is "It is mecca for..."] for the corporate world, housing some of the best MNCs in the business, like Tata, Birla and Reliance.

    2500 to 80,000 sq ft
    available for lease or outright.

    For more details SMS to INNOVA on 56565 or call on…………

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    Re: commercisl property ad please correct it

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    thanks a lot for correcting my grammar and the idiom. I really need to work hard to perfect my grammar

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    #4

    Re: commercisl property ad please correct it

    2500 to 80,000 sq ft available for lease or outright.
    outright purchase?

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    #5

    Re: commercisl property ad please correct it

    Quote Originally Posted by tedtmc View Post
    outright purchase?
    Here it means immediate possession of the property


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    Re: commercisl property ad please correct it

    In that case, your sentence should read:

    2500 to 80,000 sq ft available for lease and immediate possession.

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