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    Is this correct?

    We will lead the factory for better control the lot number in the future to avoid the expensive re-inspection charge, thank you for your reminder

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    Re: Is this correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    We will lead the factory for better control the lot number in the future to avoid the expensive re-inspection charge, thank you for your reminder
    Hi, Zoe!
    We will lead the factory to better control the lot number in the future to avoid the expensive re-inspection charge. Thank you for your reminder.

    Without the prior context, I'm not really sure about the underlined part...

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    Exclamation Re: Is this correct?

    You can try this one with re-arrangement of some words. Delete word in bracket.

    In future we will organize (lead) the factory for better control of the lot number in order to avoid the expensive re-inspection charge. Thank you for your reminder
    Last edited by sarat_106; 28-Jun-2008 at 13:02.

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