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    Paragraph on Real estate - Pleasse check

    While buying a home one of the most critical factors is the reputation of the developer and is it meeting your needs within your budget? In Thane city lots of projects are coming up, but one of the project which grabbed our eyeballs which is creating wave in the realty industry is ‘Puranik Villa’ from the stable of Puranik builders.


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    Re: Paragraph on Real estate - Pleasse check

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    When buying a home, two critical factors are the reputation of the developer and is the house meeting your needs within your budget. In Thane City, lots of projects are coming up, but one that caught our eye, which is creating waves in the realty industrys is ‘Puranik Villa’ from the stable of Puranik Builders.
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    "grabbed our eyeballs" is striking, but the usual idiom is "caught our/my eye"


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    Re: Paragraph on Real estate - Pleasse check

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    When buying a home, one of the most critical factors is the reputation of the developer. Another big consideration is whether the property meets your needs and is within your budget.

    In Thane city lots of new projects are appearing, but one which grabbed our attention - and is creating a big wave in the realty industry - is ‘Puranik Villa’ from the stable of Puranik builders.
    How does this look?

    I'm not a teacher.

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