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    Please correct my grammar

    Is there any update schedule for CRD1137 after review in last Saturday? If you need to waiting for the gift boxes from your printer for the other shipment of CRD619, then please start the production for CRD1137 immediately as all the materials were prepared and continue CRD619 after finish CRD1137, in order to catch the shipment date in July 15.Please try all your effort to fulfill them to meet the latest date as per your commitment. If there is any problem, please contact us again instead of keep in silence.
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    Unhappy Re: Please correct my grammar

    Anyone can help?

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    Re: Please correct my grammar

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Is there any update schedule for CRD1137 after review in last Saturday?
    Is there any update schedule for CRD1137 after review on last Saturday?
    If you need to waiting for the gift boxes from your printer for the other shipment of CRD619, then please start the production for CRD1137 immediately as all the materials were prepared and continue CRD619 after finish CRD1137, in order to catch the shipment date in July 15.
    If you need to be waiting on the gift boxes for the next shipment of CRD619, please start the production of CRD1137 immediately since all the materials were prepared.
    Having finished CRD1137 please continue CRD619 so as to catch the shipment date on July 15.
    Uh having finished was a big mistake I shold have said After finishing CRD1137....I think.
    Please try all your effort to fulfill them to meet the latest date as per your commitment.
    Please do all your effort to meet the latest date as per your commitment.
    If there is any problem, please contact us again instead of keep in silence.

    If there is any problems left, please do not hesitate to contact us again.

    As a learner, I have tried.

    I would suggest you to make shorter sentences if possible. it would be easier for me to take them in reading on.
    Last edited by e2e4; 03-Jul-2008 at 09:02.


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    Re: Please correct my grammar

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Was there any updated schedule for CRD1137 after the review last Saturday? If you are still waiting for the gift boxes from your printer for the other shipment (CRD619), then please start the production of CRD1137 immediately as all the materials are ready. You can continue with CRD619 after finishing CRD1137 in order to catch the shipment date of July 15

    Please make every effort to meet the latest date as per your commitment. If there is any problem, contact us immediately.
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    Re: Please correct my grammar

    I do not understand what are the gift boxes from your printer?


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    Re: Please correct my grammar

    Quote Originally Posted by e2e4 View Post
    I do not understand what are the gift boxes from your printer?
    Me, neither.
    And that's why I didn't have a go at this one, though I knew she needed help from somebody sooner. I'm sorry, Zoe.


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    Re: Please correct my grammar

    The fancy boxes that items are put into so they can be sold as "gift items" in the shops, like this: Google Image Result for http://www.characterbears.co.uk/productimages/display/SS-image-2007-05-17-464c5700e7667.jpg. They probably have fancy printed paper coverings on them, hence the involvement of a printer.

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    Re: Please correct my grammar

    After all it seems as though we've had no chance this time tzfujimino.
    I've tried for nobody else did.
    I'd better say nothing else.


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    Re: Please correct my grammar

    You did your best and quite a lot was ok Business communications are not the easiest of things to correct. Watch out for subject/verb coordination.

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