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    #1

    is this sentence correct?

    The survey cost is around HKD800.00 per all type container, but only allow in 2 hour and HKD100 per each excess hour, the booking form send one day in advance. Please find the attached cost for your review, and let me know if you need further details.


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    #2

    Re: is this sentence correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    The survey cost is around HKD800.00 for all types of container, but the price only applies for 2 hours and it is HKD100 for each extra hour, the booking form must be sent one day in advance. Please find the price(s) attached for your review, and let me know if you need further details.
    I'm not sure if I've lost the intended meaning with my corrections.

    I'm not a teacher.

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    #3

    Exclamation Re: is this sentence correct?

    You can try this one by deleting words in the brackets.
    The survey cost is around HKD800.00 for (per) all types container, (but) with an (only) allowable time limit of (in) 2 hours and for each additional hour HKD100 will be extra.(per each excess hour). The booking form has to be sent one day in advance. Please find the attached rate of cost for your review and let me know if you need further details.

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    #4

    Re: is this sentence correct?

    Zoe - what is a "survey cost"?

    rental cost?

    lease cost?

    use cost?

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    #5

    Re: is this sentence correct?

    Hi Susiedqq,

    It should be examine cost

    Regards
    Zoe

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    #6

    Re: is this sentence correct?

    Same as "inspection fee"?

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    #7

    Re: is this sentence correct?

    Yes

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