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Originally Posted by bhaisahab
Which aspects would you like me to clarify?
I was preparing you for responses like post #18, which is mild. (I don't need clarification.)
Originally Posted by RonBee
That may be true, but it is not conversation. It is an essay.
Yes, that's true, but there are also many people who would write like that, not for an examination in English obviously, so it depends what we are dealing with here.