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    Wink Please check the sentenses.

    (1) We place risk and cost management at the center of our corporate efforts. At the same time, we intend to thoroughly value high-quality customer service. Though these approaches, we are endeavoring to further strengthen business infrastructure so that we can continue high-level performance.

    (2) Given our improved financial situation, the board of directors approved 20% sharp increase in year-end dividend, which raises the annual dividend 30%. This year's sales are up 25%, and earnings per shares (EPS) are up 18%.

    Could you please check these sentences? The sentences are natural for you? The sentences make sense? The sentences have no grammatical errors?
    Thank you very much for your kind help.

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    Exclamation Re: Please check the sentenses.

    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
    (1) We place risk and cost management at the center of our corporate efforts. At the same time, we intend to thoroughly value high-quality customer service . Through these approaches, we are endeavoring to further strengthen business infrastructure so that we can continue to achieve high-level performance.

    (2) Given our improved financial situation, the board of directors approved 20% sharp increase in year-end dividend, which raises the annual dividend by 30%. This year's sales are up by 25%, and earnings per shares (EPS) (are up) by 18%.

    Could you please check these sentences? The sentences are natural for you? The sentences make sense? The sentences have no grammatical errors?
    Thank you very much for your kind help.
    To me it appears very natural with negigible gramatical mistake. Please delete the highlighted words in bracket to avoid repetition.


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    Re: Please check the sentenses.

    a person anyone you like

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    Exclamation Re: Please check the sentenses.

    Quote Originally Posted by indiraguna View Post
    a person anyone you like
    No. You can say: a person someone you like. If like to add a context, it can be: He is a person some one you like.

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