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    help for this sentence

    Could you please advise your production start date for us to our customer today. This shipment is urgent and we had advised to you before.

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    Re: help for this sentence

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    Could you please advise our customer on the start date of production? As discussed with you earlier, please note that this shipment is very very urgent.

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    Re: help for this sentence

    I would like revise the sentence, as below :

    Please advise us your production start date, today. We need your schedule / plan to our customer as this is a urgent shipment which has advised you many times before.

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    Exclamation Re: help for this sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Could you please advise your date of starting production to us today for keeping our customer informed. This shipment is urgent and we have advised you about this before.
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