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    Post Please check - My great accomplishment

    In the final year, I needed a team of five people to participate in competition, who ever join me earlier left it at the last moment. I was perplexed how to get a team, a evening before the competition I convinced four people to turn up early morning next day so we can do rehearsal (as we have to enact the ad script on the stage). They all agreed to come as early as 5:30 in the morning. We came up with the concept and did the rehearsal. We won the first prize. Moral of story if you are determined to achieve something just go for it.

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    Question Re: Please check - My great accomplishment

    In the final year, I needed a team of five people to participate in a competition. Unfotunately who ever had joined me earlier left (it) at the last moment. I was perplexed as to how to get a team. Luckily in the evening before the competition I could convince four people to turn up early morning the next day so that we can do rehearsal (as we have to enact the ad script on the stage). They all agreed to come as early as 5:30 in the morning. We visualized (came up with) the concept and did the rehearsal. We won the first prize. Moral of story: if you have the will and (are) determination to achieve something just go for it.

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    Re: Please check - My great accomplishment

    In the final year I needed a team of five people to participate in a competition, those who had joined me earlier left at the last moment. I was perplexed as to how to get a team together. Finally, the evening before the competition I convinced four people to turn up early next morning to do a rehearsal (as we had to enact the ad script on the stage). They all agreed to come early, at 5:30 in the morning, we came up with the concept and did the rehearsal. We won the first prize. Moral of the story; if you are determined to achieve something just go for it.

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    Re: Please check - My great accomplishment

    How about:

    The moral of the story is: where there is a will, there is a way or determination conquers all.

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