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    is this sentence o.k. in terms of grammar

    Please suggest me is there any mistake in this title
    Improvement in production of cellwall degrading enzymes from Trichoderma harzianum by using dried mycelia of Fusarium oxysporum f.sp. ciceris

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    Re: is this sentence o.k. in terms of grammar

    Quote Originally Posted by samantha_dear3 View Post
    Please suggest me is there any mistake in this title
    Improvement in production of cellwall-degrading enzymes by Trichoderma harzianum (by)(through) using dried mycelia of Fusarium oxysporum f.sp. ciceris
    Welcome! My suggestions are in blue.

    1...If the enzymes degrade cell walls, you should use the hyphenated compound adjective 'cellwall-degrading'.
    2...If the enzymes are produced by Trichoderma harzianum, I would say "by 'Trichoderma harzianum'.
    3...You can say "by using dried...", but if you want to avoid 'by Trichoderma harzanium by using', you say 'through using dried...'.

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    Re: is this sentence o.k. in terms of grammar

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    Please tell me if there is a mistake in this title.

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