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    please proofread..

    hello teachers..could you please check this sentence for me.thank you in advance.

    I've written a mail to you just now and it was quite a long one but an accident occured and I lost all the words.Thus, i'm rewriting it now.

    I ain't sure with the tense - "have written",should it be "had written"?

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    Re: please proofread..

    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
    I ain't sure with the tense
    This ain't exactly the way to endear yourself to an English teacher whose help you want.
    But since I'm here:
    I wrote an email (or a letter) to you just now and it was quite a long one, but an accident occurred and I lost all the words. Thus, I'm rewriting it now.

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