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    can please correct sentences of the below conversation.

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    Chakradhara ...shall we move Chiranjeevi Th...one min 9:41:07 PM?u can go chakri.........I need to be here for 10 min 9:42:56 PMChakradhara ...i am waiting for u man 9:43:16 PM?no problem 9:43:20 PMChiranjeevi Th...of course 9:43:23 PM?If it wil b extended then u wil hav to suffer .9:43:54 PMChakradhara ...ok i will wait here upto my convinent after that i leave for the day 9:44:21 PMChiranjeevi Th...good idea 9:44:37 PM?thanks





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    #2

    Re: can please correct sentences of the below conversation.

    The formatting problems make your post very hard to read.

    Can you retry with just the dialogue?


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    Re: can please correct sentences of the below conversation.

    Smith : shall we move Chiru

    chiru : u can go chakri.........I need to be here for 10 more min
    Smith : i am waiting for u man

    Chiru : of course ,If it wil be extended then u wil hav to suffer
    Smith : ok i will wait here upto my convinent after that i leave for the day
    Chiru : Ok...


    cheers,
    Chiru.


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    Re: can please correct sentences of the below conversation.

    Quote Originally Posted by chiru_thota View Post
    Smith : Shall we move, Chiru?

    chiru : You can go, Chakri. I need to be here for 10 more minutes
    Smith :I am waiting for you, man.

    Chiru : Of course ,If it wil be extended then u wil hav to suffer if it has to longer, you will just have to suffer.
    Smith : Ok. I will wait here upto my convinent for 10 minutes but after that I leave for the day.
    Chiru : Ok...


    cheers,
    Chiru.
    Thank you. However, it will also be much easier if you do not use texting abbreviations and contractions, but proper English, with punctuation.


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    Re: can please correct sentences of the below conversation.

    Thanks you very much Angilika.


    chiru.

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