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    shift sentence

    I need help with this revising this sentences to eliminate incorrect shifts

    the sentence is

    Congress needed money to pay for US participation in World War II, so a new tax system was proposed.

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    Re: shift sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
    I need help (with) revising this sentence to eliminate incorrect shifts.

    the sentence is

    Congress needed money to pay for US participation in World War II, so a new tax system was proposed.
    The "Congress" sentence is fine as is.

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