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    Proposal for New Mobile Handset

    Please proofread.....



    Proposal for New Mobile Handset.

    We would like to inform you that, a mobile handset was given to our General Manager at the time of reporting for duty. The handset was purchased in the year 2005 and the same is not working properly since last three months. Currently our General Manager is using his personal handset. We now propose for a new handset of Rs. 12000/- to our General Manager.

    Put up for your necessary action.



    Cheers
    Rasna

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    Re: Proposal for New Mobile Handset

    The handset was purchased in 2005 and has not been not working properly for the last three months.
    We now propose purchasing a new handset at Rs. 12000/- for our General Manager.

    Put up for your necessary action.- Is this a set phrase in India?

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    Re: Proposal for New Mobile Handset

    Mr. Tdol,

    Thank you for the reply.
    I would like to inform you that, we had given a mobile handset to our GM during his DOJ to PNT. He has joined us on December 10, 2007. Earlier this handset was using by our CEO, who has resigned to handed over the charge to GM. After taking over the mobile from CEO, our GM has used for 3-4 months, now the set is not functioning properly. We have to purchase a new mobile worth Rs. 12000/- for GM's use, since, he is using his personal mobile now. For that a proposal to be submitted to our HR dept. for necessary action / approval from the management to go ahead and buy a new set.

    Looking for your elaborated reply, pl.

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    Re: Proposal for New Mobile Handset

    Proposal for New Mobile Handset.

    We would like to inform you that, a mobile handset was given to our General Manager when he began work. The handset was purchased in the year 2005 and has not been working properly for the last three months. Currently our General Manager is using his personal handset. We now propose purchasing a new handset at Rs. 12000/- for our General Manager.

    I look forward to hearing from you.

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    Re: Proposal for New Mobile Handset

    I prefer the active voice for the first sentence. Perhaps:
    We would like to inform you that we gave a mobile handset to our General Manager when he joined the firm on December 10, 2007. The handset was purchased in the year 2005 and has not been working properly for the last three months. (Currently our General Manager is using his personal handset.) We propose purchasing a new handset at Rs. 12000 for our General Manager.

    I look forward to hearing from you.

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