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    inspection - are these correct?

    Both our company and the customer are requested cargoes inspection, and need the online inspection from our company. Please keep us posted on the materials status, mass production start date as well.

    As per your verbal information, we noticed all the materials are ready for HV456 and planned to start the production, please advise your mass production start date as we need to conduct the online inspection. Thanks you.

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    Re: inspection - are these correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Both our company and the customer are requested cargoes inspection, and need the online inspection from our company. Please keep us posted on the materials status, mass production start date as well.

    As per your verbal information, we noticed all the materials are ready for HV456 and planned to start the production, please advise your mass production start date as we need to conduct the online inspection. Thanks you.
    Aside from grammatical errors your post houses, I don't seem to understand the basics of it:
    -Is cargo inspection requested by or for the company and the customer?
    -Who is obliged to conduct the inspection?
    -Do you need verbal information verification, or what? That part of the sentence does not seem to have anything to do with the rest of it, as conducting the inspection would not have had to be set, had the verification already took place.
    -What do you mean by ''advise your mass production start date''?

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    Exclamation Re: inspection - are these correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Both our company and the customer have requested inspection of cargoes , so (and need) the online inspection is needed from our company. Please keep us posted on the materials status as well as the date of starting mass production. ( as well.)

    As per your verbal information, we have noted (noticed) that all the materials are ready for starting (and planned to start) the production of HV456. Please advise your starting date of mass production as we need to conduct the online inspection. Thanking you.


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    Re: inspection - are these correct?

    How about?
    Both our company and the customer are requesting an online cargo inspection. Please keep us posted on the materials status as well as provide us with your mass production start so (that) we can schedule the inspection.

    As per your verbal request, all the materials are ready for HV456, and production is in the planning stages.

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