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    #1

    Are these sentences correct?

    Regarding the shipment sample, you may ask Sandy to handle

    Please make sure the approved sample has been ready for inspection on July 23

    We noted the online inspection was conducted on last Friday, will provide us the report for record?


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    #2

    Re: Are these sentences correct?

    I'm a learner like you. My suggestion is ...

    1st Sentence
    It's ok except the omission of . (full stop). :P

    2nd Sentence
    Please make sure the approved sample are ready for inspection on July 23

    3rd Sentence
    We noted the online inspection was conducted on last Friday. Will it provide us the report for record?


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    #3

    Re: Are these sentences correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Regarding the shipment sample, you may ask Sandy to handle this.

    Please make sure the approved sample has been ready is ready for inspection on July 23

    We noted the line inspection was conducted on last Friday, will provide us the report for record?. Will you be providing us with a report for our records?
    "online" specifically means that you are connected to the internet. I think you mean that there was an inspection carried out at the factory on the production line.

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