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      • Native Language:
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      • Congo
      • Current Location:
      • Australia

    • Join Date: Oct 2006
    • Posts: 548
    #1

    use of 'On which'

    Hi,

    Could you please correct the following text for grammatical errors?

    Before accepting my current job, I consulted with you about the potential date I could join this firm on. On which, you suggested that I should join it immediately, as it represented a better opportunity for me. Had you insisted on a pre-departure notice, I could have delayed my joining date. Moreover as a courtesy gesture, I sent in four prospective candidates to you as my replacement.

    Thanks,

    MG.


    • Join Date: Jul 2008
    • Posts: 7
    #2

    Re: use of 'On which'

    Quote Originally Posted by musicgold View Post
    Hi,

    Could you please correct the following text for grammatical errors?

    Before accepting my current job, I consulted with you about the potential the date that I could join this firm, which you suggested that I should join it immediately, as it represented a better opportunity for me. Had you insisted on a pre-departure notice, I could have delayed my joining date. As a courtesy gesture, moreover , I sent in four prospective candidates to you as my replacements.

    Thanks,

    MG.
    did my best already

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