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    URGENT!! can someone help me make this letter more FORMAL?

    Dear___,

    I am here to inform you that starting July 7th, 2008, Taliek Thomas will be a camper in Stuyvesant Gardens until August 29th, 2008.

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    Re: URGENT!! can someone help me make this letter more FORMAL?

    Dear___,

    I wish to inform you that Mr Taliek Thomas will be a camper at Stuyvesant Gardens from July 7th to August 29th, 2008.

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    Re: URGENT!! can someone help me make this letter more FORMAL?

    Dear___,

    I'd like to inform you that Mr Taliek Thomas will camp at Stuyvesant Gardens from July 7th to August 29th, 2008.

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    Re: URGENT!! can someone help me make this letter more FORMAL?

    Dear___,

    This is to inform you that starting July 7th, 2008 Taliek Thomas will be a camper in Stuyvesant Gardens until August 29th, 2008.
    Ken, what does "be a camper" mean, and what is the letter about? That is, why are you writing the letter?



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    Re: URGENT!! can someone help me make this letter more FORMAL?

    Quote Originally Posted by Soup View Post
    Dear___,

    This is to inform you that starting July 7th, 2008 Taliek Thomas will be a camper in Stuyvesant Gardens until August 29th, 2008.
    Ken, what does "be a camper" mean, and what is the letter about? That is, why are you writing the letter?


    I have no idea too...I just got an order form my supervisor...She asked me to create a letter from the note that she gave me.
    On the note, she wrote these:

    " For Stuyvesant Gardens
    For Taliek Thomas
    Stating that
    He is a camper here at stuyvesant Gardens
    start 7-7-08
    Ends 8-29-08 "

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    Re: URGENT!! can someone help me make this letter more FORMAL?

    OK. Thanks. Then this one will work:
    Dear___,

    This is to inform you that starting July 7th, 2008 Taliek Thomas will be a camper in Stuyvesant Gardens until August 29th, 2008.

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