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    topic sentence

    please help me to check this topic sentence, you can feel free to add your opionions, thanks!


    The institution of marriage has changed dramatically in the recent decades in America; one example is more couples are choosing to divorce instead of keeping the marriage relationship.


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    Re: topic sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by ccone View Post
    please help me to check this topic sentence, you can feel free to add your opionions, thanks!


    The institution of marriage has changed dramatically in the recent decades in America; one example is more couples are choosing to divorce instead of keeping the marriage relationship.
    ...instead of staying married

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    #3

    Re: topic sentence

    in the recent decade - in recent decades ?

    not at teacher

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    Re: topic sentence

    I agree that it should be "in recent decades".

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