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    please help me to check the grammar.

    Marriage could make a woman becomes a wife or bride, marriage has celebration; however, divorce could only make a woman’s life devastating or becomes a single mother.

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    Exclamation Re: please help me to check the grammar.

    Quote Originally Posted by ccone View Post
    Marriage could make a woman to become a wife or a bride, marriage means (has) celebration; however, divorce could only make a woman’s life devastating or to become a single mother.
    The word in red adds meaning which may be replaced.

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    Re: please help me to check the grammar.

    Marriage could make a woman become a wife or a bride, marriage has celebrations; however, divorce could only make a woman’s life devastated or cause her to be a single mother.


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    Re: please help me to check the grammar.

    Why are you using a conditional?

    Marriage is a fact - a person who is married is a husband or a wife. A woman is a bride at her wedding and a wife in her marriage.

    A woman's role changes to wife on marriage; divorce could only devastate her, and possibly make her into a single parent.

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