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    Smile Re: Bus Explosions (2)(for corrections)

    Hello! Could someone please proofread the below sentences? Thank you!


    Beijing’s security measures are so tight that bring a lot of troubles which incurred complaints of the locals and tourists. Kunming is several thousands kilometers away from Beijing but the two bombs was an worring signal that indicates the intensified domestic unrests before the athletes and media from all over the world come to China.

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    Re: Bus Explosions (2)(for corrections)

    Beijing’s security measures are so tight that they bring a lot of troubles which incurred complaints (of) from the locals and tourists.

    Kunming is several thousands kilometers away from Beijing but the two (bombs) bombing incidents were (was an worring signal) a worrying sign that indicates the intensified domestic unrests before the athletes and media from all over the world come to China.

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    Tedtmc:

    Thank you a bunch! Have a good day there.

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