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    Help in rewriting a sentence.

    I need help in rewriting this sentence. This is how the sentence was given to me, but it needs to be rewritten.

    Comparative age and growth of the Nile tilapia from lake Wamala, Unganda were determined difference in growth patters were related to diet patters.

    Could you write it this way?

    Comparative age and growth of the Nile tilapia determined differences in growth patterns related to diet patters found from lake Wamala, Uganda.

    Thanks!!! Cindy R.

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    Re: Help in rewriting a sentence.

    Comparative age and growth of the Nile tilapia from lake Wamala, Unganda were determined and difference in growth patterns were related to diet patterns.


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    Re: Help in rewriting a sentence.

    Thank you. You make it so simple....thanks so much.

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