I am drafting a letter to my uncle Please correct if I have made any mistakes in the

[Unregistered]

Every day I am following the suggestions which you have told me on that day and it’s really helped me in my work.
The thing and suggestions which you have given to me really improve my self
and I can see the change in me thank you for your valuable suggestions.

[Anglika]

Every day I am following follow the suggestions which you have told me made on that day and it’s really helped me in my work. The thing and suggestions which you have given to me really improve my self and I can see the change in me.They have really helped me to improve and I can see the changes in myself. Thank you for your valuable suggestions.

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[John1229]

Thank you for your help. I can see there is a lot to improve.