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    #1

    Are these sentences correct?

    Please find attached the clear report for your record

    Billy will arrive to our China office on July 31 to August 01, he would like discuss with you about our company's procedure

    We just receive an update forwarder information from our customer, it is not handle by you. Thank you for your help


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    Re: Are these sentences correct?

    [quote=Zoe2008;326715]Please find attached the clear report for your record [ok grammatically. See question below]

    Billy will arrive to be in our China office on from July 31 to August 01. He would like discuss with you about our company's procedure our company's procedures with you.

    We just receive an update have just received updated forwarder information from our customer. It [??the forwwrding] is not handled by you. Thank you for your help[/quote]

    Zoe - what is a "clear report" - a report that has been cleared and accepted, or a report that is in itself easy to understand?

    NB You arrive at a place, not to a place.

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    #3

    Re: Are these sentences correct?

    clear report - my meaning is more clear report, as the one I sent it before was so dark and unclear


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    Re: Are these sentences correct?

    Then you could say "...attached is a clarified report... which will make better sense than "a clear report". Something that is clarified is something that has been made clearer.

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