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    3>Adventure In The Love-wonderland

    She may be tired, and readily lay on her bed. After a moment, I could discover that here is a dormitory of women-wokers.
    Although so, the room, beyond all questions,is not slovenly and sloppy. As it should be, I asked dream-girl: Why are you in?Oh, its nothing.I am willing to hide ,or rather avoid pareants to work here.Its just only so.


    Can you rectify my mistakes in the essay, God bless you!


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    Re: 3>Adventure In The Love-wonderland

    Quote Originally Posted by dodonaomik View Post
    She may be tired, and readily lay on her bed. After a moment, I could discover that here is a dormitory of women-wokers.
    Although so, the room, beyond all questions,is not slovenly and sloppy. As it should be, I asked dream-girl: Why are you in?Oh, its nothing.I am willing to hide ,or rather avoid pareants to work here.Its just only so.


    Can you rectify my mistakes in the essay, God bless you!
    She was tired and lay down on her bed. After a moment I realized this was the dormitory for the female workers/for the women. Even so, it was neat and tidy. I asked Dream-Girl, "Why are you here?" She answered, "Oh, it's nothing. I wanted to avoid my parents so I came to work here. That's all".

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