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    #1

    please correct my sentence

    We noted that you had drawn one carton from them to rechecking the power today, please send your result before 17:00 today, as we need to review and release for you to arrange shipment tomorrow.

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    Re: please correct my sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    We noted that you had drawn one carton from them to rechecking the power today, please send your result before 17:00 today, as we need to review and release for you to arrange shipment tomorrow.
    We noted that you had drawn one carton from them to recheck the power today. Please send us your result before 17:00 today because we need to review and release from you in order to arrange shipment tomorrow.

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    Re: please correct my sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    We noted that you had drawn one carton from them to rechecking the power today, please send your result before 17:00 today, as we need to review and release for you to arrange shipment tomorrow.
    it is noticed that you have drawn a carton for rechecking.Pls send results today till 17:00 .To review and release ,so that you would be able to do shipment arrangements tomorrow.

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