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    veiw sentence

    My experience working in the field has given me the momentum to perssue a live of adventure ...

    -How do you assess this sentence .
    -could you rephrase/improve thought.


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    Re: veiw sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by muhaned View Post
    My experience working in the field has given me the momentum to perssue a live of adventure ...

    -How do you assess this sentence .
    -could you rephrase/improve thought.
    It is grammatically ok, though "My experience of working ..." is better, and there are two spelling errors.

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