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    END/5>Adventure In The Love-wonderland

    In the dream, Gream-Girl having not many words, even rare and sparse, but myself love her deeply. Dream-Girl’s visage and countenance was lovely and innocent, one way or another, strongly and easily consolved and placated one’s spirit and mood?/sensibility?/susceptibility?.
    Maybe the dream is very odd and bizarre ,to some extent.




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    Last edited by dodonaomik; 03-Aug-2008 at 13:58.

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    Re: END/5>Adventure In The Love-wonderland

    Quote Originally Posted by dodonaomik View Post
    In the dream, Gream-Girl having not many words, even rare and sparse, but myself love her deeply. Dream-Girl’s visage and countenance was lovely and innocent, one way or another, strongly and easily consolved and placated one’s spirit and mood?/sensibility?/susceptibility?.
    Maybe the dream is very odd and bizarre ,to some extent.
    THANK YOU FOR YOUR CORRECTION.
    That's quite good. Here's my take:

    In the dream, Dream-Girl, not having many words, rare and sparse;
    But me, I love her dearly, Dream-Girl. With an innocent visage;
    Her lovely countenance, somehow, easily and strongly placates my mood and spirit.
    Maybe the dream is odd, bizarre, to some extent, Dream-Girl.

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    Re: END/5>Adventure In The Love-wonderland

    Quote Originally Posted by Raymott View Post
    That's quite good. Here's my take:

    In the dream, Dream-Girl, not having many words, rare and sparse;
    But me, I love her dearly, Dream-Girl. With an innocent visage;
    Her lovely countenance, somehow, easily and strongly placates my mood and spirit.
    Maybe the dream is odd, bizarre, to some extent, Dream-Girl.

    Cool, very cool, too cool

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