Student or Learner
Love Is Like A Ghost,whose Existence Many People Believe In While Few Ever Come Across One.
1. Are There Any Grammatic Mistakes?
2. Is There Any Logical Problem?
3. Is "while" Good Here? (some Better Words/ Phrases Suggested?)
4.is "come Across" Good Here? (some Better Words/ Phrases Suggested?)
Thx So Much 4 Reading!
Thx Much More For Giving Answers!
Acutally I've been thinking about using "it" instead of "one",
as well as "although" instead of "while".
Just now I googled it, and found something might be the original edition --
"True love is like a ghost; everyong talks of it, but few have met it face to face."
Which one do you think is better?
I mean which one sounds more natural and more like native English.
Your sentence is fine, the one you found is more skilled in its use of idiom. That is something that can only come through practice.