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    please correct the sentence


    Is below statemen correct kinly rectify if not ....

    So I would kindly request you to give it a due consideration.




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    Re: please correct the sentence

    • I would kindly request (that) you give it due consideration.


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    Is the statement below correct? Kindly correct it if not.



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    Re: please correct the sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by Soup View Post
    • I would kindly request (that) you give it due consideration.

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    Is the statement below correct? Kindly correct it if not.
    As you may be aware that the functional specification of this requirement is changed and 10 hours is too less for it.
    I would like to bring to your notice that due to the change in the functional specification the analysis time has been doubled.
    Apart from this the requirement that has been demanded contains additional code change as the initial requirement wanted us to check only for the absolute sum whereas now weighted sum has to be calculated keeping tolerance in consideration. We have to put some additional checks in our code for this. So all this adds to our effort.
    Additional Analysis Time : 3 Hrs
    Additional Efforts in coding : 4 hrs
    Testing and documentation Effort : 1hr
    So total additional demand of 8 hrs and total estimation of 18 hours.
    Hence I would kindly request that you give it due consideration.

    Can you please correct it ???

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