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    • Join Date: Aug 2008
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    #1

    sir

    could u pls tell me wheter the following sentnce is grammatiaclly correct or not?
    "How can you make his words headline?"


    regards...

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    #2

    Re: sir

    Quote Originally Posted by bykaraa View Post
    could u pls tell me whether the following sentence is grammatically correct or not?
    "How can you make the headline(s) of his words ?"
    regards...
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    Re: sir

    Quote Originally Posted by bykaraa View Post
    Could you please tell me whether the following sentence is grammatiacally correct or not?
    "How can you make his words headline?"


    regards...
    How can you make his words a headline? Slangish.

    I suggest:
    How can you make a headline out of his words?

    Another friendly suggestion: refrain from using 'chatlish' - use punctuation, write full words and capitalise your letters. It'll make your posts much more readable.

    I.

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