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    #1

    The sentence needs to be improved


    Our economic expansion has realized the transition from quantitative change to qulitative change.

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    'Our economic growth has realized the transition from quantitative to qualitative change.'

    Congratulations, NH!


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    #3
    Quote Originally Posted by Mister Micawber
    'Our economic growth has realized the transition from quantitative to qualitative change.'

    Congratulations, NH!
    Do you feel comfortable to change expansion to growth without more information on the context?

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    #4
    Yes, I do. 'Growth' is the collocation here, unless it is some very wierd economic development you are speaking of.

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    #5
    Thanks Mister Micawber.

    My broadband connection to the net was cut down by ChinaTelecom and now recovered.

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    #6
    I agree with Mr Micawber that 'growth' is the collocation for here.

    How about this?

    'Our economic growth has made the transition from quantitative to qualitative change.'

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    #7
    Excellent! Tdol! :D

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    You're welcome.

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