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    #1

    Is this sentence correct?

    Dear Teacher,

    Is this sentence correct?
    At first the piano teaching started in our school with the leadership of the following teachers: Mr. Csaba Bányai, Miss Mónika Baja, Mr. István Pozor, Mrs. Árpád Szőlősi, Mr. Zoltán Barkóczi and with those teachers who still teach the childern: Mrs. Tamás dr. Irinyi, Mrs. Gabriella Magyar, Miss Judit Dancs.

    Thanks,
    rafael


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    #2

    Re: Is this sentence correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by rafaelxx View Post
    Dear Teacher,

    Is this sentence correct?
    At first the piano teaching started Piano teaching first started in our school with the leadership under the supervision of the following teachers: Mr. Csaba Bányai, Miss Mónika Baja, Mr. István Pozor, Mrs. Árpád Szőlősi, Mr. Zoltán Barkóczi, and continues with those teachers who still teach the childern: Mrs. Tamás dr. Irinyi, Mrs. Gabriella Magyar, Miss Judit Dancs.

    Thanks,
    rafael
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    #3

    Re: Is this sentence correct?

    At first In the beginning, (the) piano teaching was started in our school with the leadership of the by the following teachers:

    -Mr. Csaba Bányai, Miss Mónika Baja, Mr. István Pozor, Mrs. Árpád Szőlősi, Mr. Zoltán Barkóczi

    -teachers who still teach the childern: Mrs. Tamás dr. Irinyi, Mrs. Gabriella Magyar, Miss Judit Dancs.

    I think the list is too long to be in one sentence.
    There can't be that many 'leaders'.


    not a teacher
    Last edited by tedtmc; 05-Aug-2008 at 16:04.

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