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1. On the morning of July 21, I started from home, naturally arrived Hangzhou at noon. My frame of mind was poor and wear, so madeup/set my mind to do sightseeing of the West Lake to unload the pressure on my clandestine place of heart.
早上从家里出发， 然后中午时分到达杭州， 心情不好， 于是决定到西湖卸卸压。
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Last edited by dodonaomik; 05-Aug-2008 at 16:27.
I departed from home on the morning of July 21 and arrived in Hangzhou at noon. Tired and worn out, I decided to do some sightseeing at the West Lake. It is great place for a quiet retreat and to unwind.
('Clandestine is' associated with illicit activities. You should also post the Chinese version )
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Last edited by dodonaomik; 05-Aug-2008 at 16:41.