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    #1

    could you please correct my text

    Thanks for the information, please also provide the update schedule for the remaining 2 orders. Please be remind that all the goods must be 100% completed with full packing during the inspection date from your provided. In order to any charge occur, please advise us two days advance if there is any change for the schedule.

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    Exclamation Re: could you please correct my text

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Thanks for the information, please also provide the update schedule for the remaining 2 orders. Please be reminded that all the goods must be 100% completed with full packing during the inspection date as provided you. In case of (order to) any charge to this scedule (occur), please advise us two days in advance. (if there is any change for the schedule.)
    Delete words in brackets.

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    #3

    Re: could you please correct my text

    Thanks for the information,(*) please also provide the update(d) schedule for the remaining 2(two**) orders. Please be reminded that all the goods must be 100% completed with full packing during the inspection date as provided by you. In case of (order to) any change to this schedule (occur), please advise us two days in advance. (if there is any change for the schedule.)

    * - shouldn't this be a full-stop?
    ** - single digit numbers to be in words

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    Re: could you please correct my text

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Thanks for the information. Please also provide the update schedule for the remaining 2 orders. Please remember that all the goods must be 100% completed with full packing during the inspection date from your providedat the time of your inspection. In order to any charge occurs, Please advise us two days in advance if there is of any change to the schedule.
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