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    scheudle

    Are these correct?

    Seems the factory cannot advance the schedule during the peak seasons. Would you please explain / advise to Michael about this?

    We understand the schedule is quite tight during the peak season, and we will explain this to our customer. Please keep the schedule on time; we would appreciate for further improve schedule, even though a little bit early.

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    It seemed that the factory cannot advance the schedule as it is the peak season now. Would you please explain this to Michael ?
    We understand that the schedule is quite tight now, and we will explain this to our customer. Please try to catch up with the schedule. It wll be highly appreciated if the schedule can be postponed a little bit later.

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    Re: scheudle

    Maybe I make you confused for the second sentence, how about this revision:

    We understand the schedule is quite tight as now is the peak season, we will explain this to our customer. Please keep the on time schedule; we would appreciate if you have further improve schedule, even though a little bit early.




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    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Are these correct?

    It seems the factory cannot advance the schedule during the peak seasons. Would you please explain / advise to Michael about thisabout this to Michael?

    We understand the schedule is quite tight during the peak season, and we will explain this to our customer. Please keep the schedule on time; we would appreciate for further improvement on the schedule, even though the shipment may be a little bit early.
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    Re: scheudle

    Hi teacher Anglika,

    I would like to revise the last sentence on the point 2, is this work?

    we would appreciate for further improvement on the schedule, even though there is only a little bit earlier / improvement.

    Regards
    Zoe


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    Re: scheudle

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    we would appreciate further improvement on the schedule, even if it is only a little bit.
    we would appreciate further improvement on the schedule, even if it is minor.
    we would appreciate further improvement on the schedule, even if only minor.
    These sentences mean the same thing.

    Minor = 'a little bit'.
    Last edited by monty mike; 08-Aug-2008 at 17:48.


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    Re: scheudle

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Hi teacher Anglika,

    I would like to revise the last sentence on the point 2, is this work? This will work:

    we would appreciate further improvement on the schedule, even if there is only a little improvement.

    Regards
    Zoe
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