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How can I make these sentences simpler? Are these correct?
"The aims of music education are to transmit the general literacy, to endear the different types of music and form the students' taste in music.
Piano teaching first started in our school under the supervision of the following teachers Mr. Csaba Bányai, Miss Mónika Baja, Mr. István Pozor, Mrs. Árpád Szőlősi, Mr. Zoltán Barkóczi and continues with those teachers who still teach the childern: Mrs. Tamás dr. Irinyi, Mrs. Gabriella Magyar, Miss Judit Dancs.
The flute course started long time ago under the supervision of Ildikó Sas Mrs. Sándor. Now Miss Zsuzsa Nagy is the supervisor.
Several courses started within the music education in the 2000/2001 school-year. The violin teaching began to run by Anna Tóth Mrs. Kádár. Now Lili Radovics leads this course.
Last year the zither course began under the supervision of Ágnes Magyari and Ildikó Csigei. Now Zoltán Menyhárt teaches the children.
The flute course began under the supervision of Noémi Balda, now Mariann Kovács Mrs. Molnár is the supervisor.
The brass course is the yongest, it has run for 2 years. The members develop self-discipline, can have soul growth and artistic development. This course first was supervised by Péter Győrfi. Now Lajos Alexa is the supervisor.
The aim of the solfeggio is to increase the ability of mastering musical thinking. More teacher supervise this course beside their main musical area but Irén Szatmáry and Mrs Pál Koncz dealt with this only. At present this course is under the supervision of Zsófia Hőgye.
Many times the choir of our school makes our celebrations and programs colorful. The choir began with the leading of Anna Tóth Mrs. Kádár and Éva Kiss. Now the choirmaster is Zsófia Hőgye who lifts people spirit up by the musically and socially experiece of the common singing. "
Thanks in advance,
Last edited by monty mike; 09-Aug-2008 at 23:21.
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