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  1. sterella
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    i really need help

    hi. i would love some help with the first paragraph for a letter:

    It is by this means that I allow myself to ask from you to be so kind so as to give Mr. X, who has worked for this company for four years, all the necessary assistance so that he can make the proper arrangements for obtaining his VISA for the United States of America.


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    Re: i really need help

    Quote Originally Posted by sterella View Post
    It is via this letter that I ask you to be so kind as to give Mr. X, who has worked for your company (or name the company) for four years, all the necessary assistance so that he can make the proper arrangements for obtaining his VISA for the United States of America.
    Something like that.


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    #3

    Re: i really need help

    How about:
    Quote Originally Posted by sterella View Post
    Mr. X, who has worked for this company for four years, requires all necessary assistance so that he can make the proper arrangements for obtaining his VISA for the United States of America. May I ask you to be so kind as to provide this assistance.

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    #4

    Re: i really need help

    Quote Originally Posted by sterella View Post
    hi. i would love some help with the first paragraph for a letter:

    It is by this means that I allow myself to ask from you to be so kind so as to give Mr. X, who has worked for this company for four years, all the necessary assistance so that he can make the proper arrangements for obtaining his VISA for the United States of America.
    Please give Mr. X assistance in obtaining his VISA for the US.

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    #5

    Re: i really need help

    If I were you, I would go with Anglika's suggestion, it strikes the right balance between positive and polite.

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